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Nipun Tewari's avatar

Lovely narration man, love the way how you paint the characters and the scene! And I like the way each character has a unique, palpable personality

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Mister Shock's avatar

Man, this is the type of stuff the legends of hardboiled detective fiction, and pulp noir are made of. Not just saying so I mean it. Stikes the perfect balance between sophisticated prose and a tone of vague simplicity that allows the reader to follow the story without their senses being overridden by too many details. I like the tiny details that are specified like the car's mile gauge and turning on the radio to kill the silence. Hates music but hates silence. Just news reports to make some noise. Great pulpy noir ... I hunt for this type of stuff. The car coughs to life. That was another dope line.

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