This was awesome and weird in the best way. Like, it's unmistakably noir but the descriptions themselves - dare I say the voice - they're metaphysical in a sense, almost spiritual. Very McCarthy of you. This is cool so curious to read on
That was such a great read. I was hooked the entire time and I love the way you've presented it, the emotions, the vocabs, the lines- they all were so nicely written. I enjoyed it sm. Thankyou for sharing it with us ❤️
Thanks Maria! I am so grateful that you enjoyed the piece. The novel is complete and I plan to publishing the remaining chapters in short order. Let me know how what do you think of it in the end!
Noir with a low dose of LSD. I really dig this. This was copyrighted twelve years ago? Where did it originally appear?
Only in my mind and I let it marinate there since. Hopefully is wine and not vinegar. Thank you for you attention!
Definitely wine.
This is sooo good! I really liked your writing. It is super engaging
I see. And I am left wondering. Will you open this wet portal, see what terrors lie behind it. I will be waiting there, holding the mirror.
This was awesome and weird in the best way. Like, it's unmistakably noir but the descriptions themselves - dare I say the voice - they're metaphysical in a sense, almost spiritual. Very McCarthy of you. This is cool so curious to read on
Grief is staring at the abyss, hanging on the edge. A choice is required to to either fall into or rise within.
This is awesome!
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Great start Bro. It feels surreal. Beautifully written and expressed
Lets connect bro lets subscribe 💪
Of course! I will read you with interest
I love the prose!
Thank you Michael!
This is brilliant.
Great start. The illustration adds to it too.
Thank you Ben! I am in an existential crisis around adding pictures within chapters, is it cool or cringe? I change my mind every 6hrs
Beautifully written.
I really feel the depth of words throughout.
Thank you Soren, I appreciate the attention
I definitely feel the protagonist's thoughts. I also feel soaked from the rain and it's not raining here at all. Great read, Madman.
Thank you Parker, I appreciate your attention on my work 🙏
That was such a great read. I was hooked the entire time and I love the way you've presented it, the emotions, the vocabs, the lines- they all were so nicely written. I enjoyed it sm. Thankyou for sharing it with us ❤️
Thank you for your time and attention Hazel!
Totally poetic. Really dig this
Thank you Jimmy, it's a big compliment from you!
Awesome read 🙂
Thank you for your attention 🙏
This is really well done. I am hooked! Excited to read further. I can tell how much hard work went into this, it’s inspiring.
Thanks Maria! I am so grateful that you enjoyed the piece. The novel is complete and I plan to publishing the remaining chapters in short order. Let me know how what do you think of it in the end!
Will do! Def will be done by end of week.